Thursday, 5 February 2015

Merlins responce

Good-
- You have lots of information and you expand alot
-You have enough space between each paragraphs so as two not confuse the reader
-You have got pictures so as two not leave the reader bored  
-you have bold titles to draw the reader in

Bad-
-Maybe add more pictures
-Make your back ground more bold so you can read the text easier it's in the options when customizing blogger

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